The Raise Email You Keep Rewriting (6 Templates to Finally Hit Send)

You've earned the raise - now write the email. 6 scenario-specific templates, proven subject lines, and a step-by-step framework to hit send with confidence.
Founder of WriteMail.ai Uroš Gazvoda Founder of WriteMail.ai Feb 12, 2026

You’ve earned it. You know you’ve earned it. So why is this email sitting in your drafts for the third day in a row?

You type a sentence, delete it. Try again. Too aggressive. Try softer. Now it sounds weak. Close the laptop. Tell yourself you’ll send it tomorrow.

Sound familiar?

Asking for a raise via email is one of those tasks that feels way harder than it should be. Not because the writing is complicated. Because the stakes feel personal. This isn’t a project update or a meeting request. This is you saying, out loud, “I deserve more.”

And that’s terrifying.

Here’s what helps: structure. When you know exactly what to say, when to say it, and how to phrase it, the email practically writes itself. That’s what this guide gives you. Six copy-paste raise request email templates for different scenarios, plus a step-by-step framework so you can craft your own.

Let’s get you paid what you’re worth.

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Is Email the Right Way to Ask for a Raise?

Short answer: yes, for most situations.

Some career advice says you should only ask for a raise face-to-face. That advice made sense in 2005. In 2026, email is how most professional conversations start, and a salary increase request is no exception.

Here’s why email actually works better for asking for a raise:

You get to choose your words carefully. In a live conversation, nerves take over. You ramble. You undersell yourself. An email lets you make your case clearly, without the pressure of someone staring at you while you do it.

Your manager gets time to process. A surprise face-to-face conversation about money puts your boss on the spot. An email gives them space to review your request, check budgets, and come back with a real answer instead of a knee-jerk reaction.

There’s a written record. If your manager says “let’s revisit this next quarter,” you have it in writing. No more “I don’t remember that conversation” six months later.

The one exception? If your company culture is strongly in-person, lead with a brief conversation and follow up with an email that documents everything you discussed. Either way, you’ll need a written version. These templates work for both scenarios.

When to Send a Salary Increase Request Email

Timing won’t make a weak case strong. But bad timing can sink a strong one.

Best windows to send your raise request email:

Right after a big win. Closed a major deal? Launched a successful project? Saved the company money? That’s when your value is freshest in everyone’s mind. Don’t wait three months for it to fade.

During review season. Most companies set budgets around annual reviews. Get your request in before those conversations happen, not after the budget is locked.

When you’ve absorbed extra responsibilities. If your role has expanded without a title or pay change, that gap is your strongest card. The longer you wait, the more that expanded role becomes your “normal.”

After 12+ months at your current salary. No raise in over a year? That’s not loyalty. It’s a pay cut when you factor in inflation. A Bureau of Labor Statistics report showed consumer prices rose 2.4% in the 12 months ending September 2024. If your salary didn’t move, you’re earning less in real terms.

When to hold off:

Your company just announced layoffs or budget freezes. Your manager is drowning in an urgent crisis. You started less than six months ago (unless your role changed dramatically). Read the room before you hit send.

How to Write an Email Asking for a Raise (Step by Step)

Every strong raise request follows five moves. Skip one and the whole thing weakens.

1. The Subject Line

Keep it straightforward. Your manager should know what this email is about before they open it. No clickbait, no vague “Quick question” subject lines. We’ll cover specific examples in the next section.

2. The Opening

One to two sentences. Be direct. Don’t bury the purpose under small talk or compliments.

Something like: “I’d like to discuss a compensation adjustment based on my contributions over the past year.” Clear. Professional. No games.

3. Your Evidence

This is the core of your email asking for a raise. List specific achievements with numbers when possible. Revenue generated, costs saved, projects delivered, efficiency improvements, positive client feedback.

Don’t be modest here. If you improved something by 30%, say that. If you brought in $150K in new business, write the number. Concrete results beat vague claims every single time.

4. The Ask

State a specific number or range. “I’m requesting a salary adjustment to $X” works much better than “I’d like to discuss a potential increase.” Vague asks get vague responses.

Research your market rate first. Sites like Glassdoor, PayScale, and LinkedIn Salary Insights give you a data-backed range. Aim for the upper end of reasonable. You can negotiate down. You can’t negotiate up from a lowball.

5. The Close

End with gratitude and a clear next step. “I’d welcome the chance to discuss this further. Could we find time this week?” Give them an easy path forward.

If getting the professional tone right feels like walking a tightrope, writemail.ai’s tone analyzer can help you fine-tune the wording before you hit send. It flags phrasing that might come across as too aggressive or too passive, so you don’t have to guess.

Best Subject Lines for a Raise Request Email

Your subject line determines whether your email gets opened promptly or filed under “later.” And sometimes “later” means never.

Proven options:

  • Discussion About My Compensation
  • Request for Salary Review
  • Compensation Discussion: [Your Name]
  • Salary Adjustment Request Based on Performance
  • Following Up on Compensation for [Year]

Avoid anything too casual (“Can we talk about $$$?”) or too vague (“Quick chat request”). Your manager juggles dozens of emails daily. Make yours easy to prioritize.

Before the Templates That Work – Here’s What Doesn’t

Here are 4 bad templates that show the most common mistakes – each one illustrating a different way people sabotage their own raise request. These pair well with your article’s “Mistakes That Sink Raise Emails” section.

 Bad Template 1: The Vague Apologizer

Subject: Quick question

Hope you're doing well! I wanted to touch base about something. I've been here for a while now and I feel like I've been doing really good work. I was just wondering if maybe there's any possibility of looking at my compensation at some point? No rush at all – I totally understand if the timing isn't right. Just thought I'd throw it out there.

Thanks so much!
[Your Name]

What’s wrong:

  •  Vague subject line (“Quick question” – about what?)
  •  No specific achievements or evidence
  •  No actual number requested
  •  Apologetic tone undermines the entire ask
  •  “No rush” and “just throwing it out there” gives your manager permission to ignore it
  •  “I feel like I’ve been doing really good work” – feelings aren’t evidence

 Bad Template 2: The Ultimatum

Subject: Need to talk about my salary ASAP

[Manager's Name],

I'm going to be straightforward. I've been underpaid for too long and frankly I'm over it. I know for a fact that [Coworker's Name] makes more than me and they do half the work I do.

I need a raise to at least $[amount] or I'm going to have to start exploring other opportunities. I've already had recruiters reach out to me and some of the offers are pretty tempting.

I'd rather stay, but I need to see a real commitment here. Let me know by end of week.

[Your Name]

What’s wrong:

  •  Aggressive, confrontational tone from the first line
  •  Comparing yourself to a coworker by name – guaranteed to backfire
  •  Threatening to leave puts your manager on the defensive
  •  “ASAP” and “by end of week” – ultimatums don’t create goodwill
  •  No mention of YOUR contributions, only complaints
  •  Even if you have competing offers, weaponizing them burns bridges

 Bad Template 3: The Sob Story

Subject: Salary discussion – personal matter

Hi [Manager's Name],

I hate to bring this up, but I've been struggling financially lately. My rent went up $400/month, my car needed $2,000 in repairs last month, and with grocery prices being what they are, I'm barely making ends meet. On top of that, my student loans just kicked back in.

I really need a raise to help cover these costs. Even an extra $5,000 a year would make a huge difference for me and my family right now.

I know this is uncomfortable to talk about, but I didn't know what else to do. I really appreciate everything you and the company have done for me.

Thanks for understanding,
[Your Name]

What’s wrong:

  •  Personal financial problems are not a business case for a raise
  •  Your employer pays for your VALUE, not your expenses
  •  Makes the conversation about pity rather than merit
  •  No mention of performance, achievements, or market data
  •  “I hate to bring this up” and “I know this is uncomfortable” – frames the ask as a burden
  •  Positions you as desperate, which weakens your negotiating power

 Bad Template 4: The Novel

Subject: Thoughts on my role, growth, compensation, and future direction

Hi [Manager's Name],

I wanted to take a moment to reflect on my journey here at [Company]. When I first joined back in [year], I came in as a [original title] with a passion for [field]. Over the years, I've had the privilege of working on many incredible projects that have shaped both my professional development and my understanding of our industry.

In Q1 of last year, I worked on the [Project A] initiative, which involved coordinating across three departments. Then in Q2, I transitioned to supporting [Project B], where I learned a lot about [skill]. During Q3, I was asked to help with [Project C] as well, which was a great learning experience. And most recently in Q4, I took on [Project D] alongside my regular duties…

[… 3 more paragraphs about company culture, career growth philosophy, and industry trends …]

All of this is to say that I believe a compensation adjustment would be appropriate. I've done some research and I think something in the range of maybe $X to $Y could make sense, though I'm open to discussing what works for the team and the budget.

I'd also love to chat about my career path more broadly, including potential title changes, professional development opportunities, and how my role might evolve over the next 12-18 months. Happy to discuss whenever works for your schedule.

Best regards,
[Your Name]

6 Pay Raise Email Templates You Can Copy and Paste

Each template below is ready to customize. Replace everything in [brackets] with your details, and adjust the tone to match your relationship with your manager.

Template 1: Performance-Based Raise Request

Subject: Discussion About My Compensation

Hi [Manager's Name],

I'd like to discuss a compensation adjustment that reflects my contributions over the past [time period].

Since [start date/last review], I've [specific achievement #1, with numbers]. I also [specific achievement #2], which resulted in [measurable outcome]. On top of that, [specific achievement #3].

Based on my performance and current market rates for [your role] in [your city/industry], I'm requesting a salary increase to [specific amount or percentage]. I've referenced data from [source, e.g., Glassdoor, PayScale] to make sure this request reflects fair market value.

I'm grateful for the opportunities I've had here, and I'm committed to continuing to deliver strong results. Could we schedule time this week to discuss?

Best,
[Your Name]

Template 2: Raise After Taking on More Responsibilities

Subject: Compensation Discussion: Expanded Role

Hi [Manager's Name],

Over the past [time period], my role has expanded quite a bit beyond my original job description. I've taken on [new responsibility #1], [new responsibility #2], and [new responsibility #3] on top of my existing duties.

These additional responsibilities are typically associated with a [higher-level title] position, which commands a salary range of [range] according to [source].

I'd like to discuss adjusting my compensation to [specific amount] to reflect this expanded scope. I want to make sure my pay aligns with the work I'm actually doing, and I'm excited to keep growing in this direction.

When would be a good time to talk?

Thanks,
[Your Name]

Template 3: Market Rate Adjustment

Subject: Request for Salary Review

Hi [Manager's Name],

I wanted to bring something to your attention. After researching current market compensation for [your role] in [your location/industry], I've found that the average salary range is [range], while my current compensation is [current salary].

Over the past [time period], I've consistently [key contribution]. I believe an adjustment to [specific amount] would bring my compensation in line with both market rates and my track record here.

I realize budget conversations take time, and I'm happy to be flexible on timeline. I just wanted to put this on your radar so we can work toward a fair adjustment.

I'd love to discuss when you have a few minutes.

Best,
[Your Name]

Template 4: Raise After a Major Project Win

Subject: Following Up on [Project Name], Compensation Discussion

Hi [Manager's Name],

I'm really proud of what we accomplished with [project name]. The results ([specific outcome, e.g., "$200K in new revenue," "40% reduction in processing time," "successful launch ahead of schedule"]) exceeded our initial targets.

Leading this project required [specific skills/efforts], and I believe the outcome shows the value I bring to the team. With that in mind, I'd like to discuss a compensation increase to [specific amount or percentage].

This feels like the right moment to align my salary with the level of work I'm delivering. Could we set up a quick meeting this week?

Thanks,
[Your Name]

Template 5: Annual Review Cycle Request

Subject: Compensation Discussion for [Year] Review

Hi [Manager's Name],

As we approach our [annual/quarterly] review cycle, I'd like to include a conversation about my compensation.

Over the past year, I've [achievement #1], [achievement #2], and [achievement #3]. I've also received positive feedback from [colleagues/clients/stakeholders] on [specific area].

Based on my contributions and current market benchmarks, I'm requesting an increase to [specific amount or percentage]. I believe this reflects both my performance and my continued commitment to [team/company] goals.

I look forward to discussing this during our review. If it's helpful, I'm happy to prepare a more detailed summary of my accomplishments.

Best,
[Your Name]

Template 6: Follow-Up After a Verbal Raise Discussion

Subject: Following Up on Our Compensation Conversation

Hi [Manager's Name],

Thank you for taking the time to discuss my compensation on [date]. I really appreciate your openness.

To summarize what we discussed: I requested a salary adjustment to [amount], based on [brief reason: expanded role, market data, performance]. You mentioned [their response: needing to check with HR, reviewing the budget, revisiting next quarter].

I wanted to put this in writing so we both have a clear reference point. [If applicable: You mentioned we'd follow up by [date], so I'll plan to check in then unless I hear from you sooner.]

Thanks again. I'm looking forward to the next steps.

Best,
[Your Name]

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What to Do After You Send Your Raise Request Email

You hit send. Your heart is pounding. Now what?

Give them time. Don’t expect a same-day answer. Salary decisions often involve HR, budgets, and approval chains your manager can’t shortcut. A reasonable window is 3-5 business days before you follow up.

Prepare for three responses:

“Yes, let’s make it happen.” Great. Get the new number in writing. Ask when it takes effect. Send a thank-you email confirming the details so nothing gets lost.

“Not right now, but let’s revisit.” Don’t just accept a vague “maybe later.” Ask for specifics. When exactly? What milestones would strengthen the case? Get those details documented so you can hold them accountable.

“We can’t do that.” Don’t panic. Ask what would need to change for next time. Sometimes the budget is genuinely tight. Other times, there’s room for non-salary compensation like extra PTO, a flexible schedule, a professional development budget, or a title change.

If they ghost your email: Follow up after one week. Keep it simple:

“Hi [Name], I wanted to follow up on my compensation request from [date]. Would it be possible to set up a time to discuss?” If you need help drafting that follow-up without sounding pushy, writemail.ai can help you get the tone right.

Pros and Cons of Using Writemail.ai for Your Raise Email

Pros
  • Gets you past the blank page
  • Nail the right tone
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  • Multiple versions on demand
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  • Customizable style and length
Cons
  • None. Writemail.ai handles the hardest part of asking for a raise – getting the words right – so you can focus on building your case and choosing the right moment to send.

FAQ: Your Raise Request Email Questions Answered

Is it OK to ask for a raise via email?

Absolutely. Email is a professional, documented way to start the conversation. It gives both you and your manager time to prepare. Many HR professionals actually prefer having a written request on file because it makes the approval process smoother.

Should I ask for a raise in person or via email?

Both work, and a hybrid approach is often best. Email is stronger when you want to make a detailed, evidence-based case without the pressure of a live conversation. In-person works better when you have a close relationship with your manager and want to read their reactions. The winning move? Send the email first, then follow up in person.

How much of a raise should I ask for?

Research from PayScale’s Salary Negotiation Guide suggests most successful raises fall in the 5-15% range. Under 5% barely keeps pace with inflation. Over 20% usually requires a significant role change or competing offer to justify. Anchor your ask in market data, not hope.

How do you ask for a raise after one year?

One year is a perfectly reasonable timeline. Focus your email on what you’ve accomplished since starting, how you’ve gone beyond expectations, and where market rates sit for your role today. Template 1 or Template 5 above both work well. Adjust the [time period] to highlight your first-year milestones.

What if my raise request gets denied?

A “no” right now isn’t a “no” forever. Ask for specific feedback on what would change the answer. Request a concrete timeline for revisiting the conversation. Document everything. And in the meantime, keep building your case with measurable results you can reference next time.

Conclusion

Asking for more money will always feel a little uncomfortable. That’s normal. It doesn’t mean you shouldn’t do it.

The people who earn what they’re worth aren’t necessarily better at their jobs than you are. They’re just better at asking. And now you have the words to do it.

Pick the template that fits your situation, customize it with your real achievements, and send the email. Not tomorrow. Not next week. Today.

If you want help getting the phrasing just right, writemail.ai takes the stress out of high-stakes emails, so you can focus on making your case instead of agonizing over every word.